Does the first paragraph end with a thesis? Rewrite it below. Does the thesis make an argument about the significance of a literary element at work in the song? What is that literary element? In your own words, how is this literary element important to the writer’s interpretation of the song’s “hidden” meaning?
I believe that this question will be the most helpful from the peer review in my revision. I know in my old thesis, I did not mention a literary element and did not connect a literary element in other paragraphs. So I really think by fixing this problem, I'll get a better grade.
About Me
- Autumn
- Hi, I'm Autumn and I am 18 years old, almost 19 though. I'm a Freshman at Ball State University and plan to eventually double major in drawing and art education. Right now however I am only taking the drawing classes which I think I will enjoy very much. This past summer was spent working 40 hour weeks, and the best part was quiting my job of two-and-a-half years at McDonald's. Just recently I finished my second year of working at the Indiana State Fair as a Soda Jerk in Hook's drugstore and I can not wait to go back next year. Come find me now in the Atrium where I work evenings three days a week. My hometown is Greenfield, IN where I have lived for the past four years. I went to Mount Vernon High School and probably spent more time in the band room and cafeteria than I did in my own home. This was because of Marching Band practice and Color Guard. A few random facts about myself are that I love to read and probably own almost 2000 books, I can touch my tongue to my nose (gross I know) but I can do it, and me and my boyfriend (who is also going to Ball State) are about to celebrate our two year anniversary.
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